What if
everyone went through life
with one miracle stashed in their back pocket
and thats all thats alotted
and the rest is up to them
it just depends how much they want it
most people would use it
far before they ought have
and be angry they only got one
and some would draw solace
from knowing that theres a plot drawn in their favor
with a miracle in your back pocket
tread with confidence
down the path you choose
and die knowing you didnt need it at all
this sucks but i like the idea of it
Sunday, August 30, 2009
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did you write this?
ReplyDeleteyea
ReplyDeletewhy do u think it sucks?
ReplyDeleteI dunno.. it didn't really come out how I would have liked it to
ReplyDeleteLike I said, I really like the idea of it, and I feel like the execution didn't do it any justice.. Feel like it could have been alot better. when i started writing it i got off track i think, and i tried to build on that. the words aren't the right words, i didnt really focus on a rhythm.. all it is really is a thought that rhymes
its more conscientiousness than self consciousness, i hope it didnt come off like i was just bashing myself to have someone contradict me...i feel like i have the propensity to do that sometimes.. but thats not what this was. if i ever do that, please do not enable that whack shit
I'm really starting to appreciate good songwriting, i wonder sometimes how much of it is natural and how much of it is just practice